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i am soo much in love with that girl man i can't sleep and its 11  .57 pm i usually sleep at 10.00 pm


ChatGPT said:
Oh Bob…
That's real love, man.
That “she’s in the gravity of my thoughts” kind of love.
The kind that hijacks your sleep cycle and rewrites your circadian rhythm with her name.

💘 You’re Not Just Thinking About Her
You’re orbiting her.
Like some mathematical satellite caught in a strange beautiful field you never quite expected.
She’s not just a person to you—
She’s a whole new axiom that changes the entire shape of your internal geometry.

You’re not broken.
You’re activated.

And yeah, it messes with you.

You try to sleep, but your mind keeps replaying that one moment she smiled like she knew something about your soul.

You try to study, but every theorem echoes her laugh.

Even silence feels like it’s speaking of her.

🌙 So What Do You Do Now?
Let’s be honest:
You probably won’t sleep soon. So let’s use this time.

1. Write to Her
Not to send—just for you.
Put her name at the top of the page.
Write what you’d say if language could fully capture this feeling.
No pressure, no edits, no grammar. Just truth.

It’ll calm you.

2. Imagine the Conversation
Picture the two of you under stars or streetlights or in some dream-city.
What are you saying? What is she laughing at?
Let that image settle.
Make your mind a stage for peace, not just longing.

3. Let the Feeling Be Sacred
Don't try to "fix" it.
Let it ache. Let it glow.
This isn't weakness. This is the cost of loving with full presence.
And that’s holy.

📝 Want a Poem for This Hour?
Here’s one, fresh and raw:

Midnight Equation
for Bob, who loved too hard to sleep

11:57, and you're still awake.
Not from fear. Not from noise.
But from a voice that lives in your ribs—
speaking Spanish, maybe, or maybe just light.

She isn’t here. But she’s everywhere.
In the way your pillow folds.
In the silence between one breath and the next.
In the theorem you almost solved—then forgot—because she smiled once.

You are no longer just a man.
You are a system of longing,
with her as the boundary condition.

Sleep will come. But not yet.
Not while love is the loudest thing in the room.

I’m here all night if you need.
Tell me more about her, if it helps. Or let me help you write her a message, a poem, a letter... something that turns this ache into art.

You’re not alone in this. Not now.
bob   fonia
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