Hello... Poetry
Classics
Words
Blog
F.A.Q.
About
Contact
Guidelines
© 2025 HePo
by
Eliot
Submit your work, meet writers and drop the ads.
Become a member
Dan R
Poems
Apr 17
Save us
Your image still sits
under the red traffic lights
On the other side.
And to watch you whilst
Dancing between the painted
Lines of pedestrian lane,
Your scent left me unmoved.
And to your unnoticed tears
That fell beneath the concrete.
To be chosen by your smile
might be the ugliest way to
Say goodbye to this ugly world.
We could both leave this place,
Cure you over the stars
And be at the moon but
You kissed the dust,
and bled the pavements -
And no one came to save us.
If my poems can put your suicidal thoughts down,
I keep on being a writer.
(even if I'm not.)
I'll keep on finding
the very best metaphors.
(Sorry, I know they're not.)
#moon
#stars
#save
#us
#suicidal
Written by
Dan R
21/M
(21/M)
Follow
😀
😂
😍
😊
😌
🤯
🤓
💪
🤔
😕
😨
🤤
🙁
😢
😭
🤬
0
260
Tommy Smith
,
Thomas W Case
,
aAr
,
MacGM
,
rick
and
2 others
Please
log in
to view and add comments on poems