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Apr 15
My first kiss was not a fairytale...

It was neither soft nor gentle,
no candelight, nor whispered promises-
just burning rage,
and violence in chains, now broken.

It did not come bearing roses,
nor with a heart filled.
My first kiss was not for love,
It was neither warm nor sweet.

Instead...

It tasted like iron,
a taste of broken pride.
Dripping with embering red,
not from lips,
But from a place where scars cannot hide.

It taught me nothing of love-
only the language of cruelty.
And yet,
Some part of me still remembers it
as something intimate.
Something real.

Not every kiss leaves you wanting more.
Some just leave a scar.
I was watching a hand-to-hand fight scene between 2 soldiers in the movie "All Quiet on the Western Front". I tried making the "Kiss" be a representation of the fight, and I hope it worked out well.
Written by
Nicklas  20/M/Danmark
(20/M/Danmark)   
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